SO MANY FEELS FROM THIS FIC!! You did an excellent job, solid writing, realistic characterization, and HOT DAMN- I really wasn't a Dei fan before but... you've convinced me. I've successfully been converted. Have a great day!!!- your fic made mine.
re-reading the story i i just got to this part, i'm trying so hard not to cry cuz i know what's going to happen next and i don't want it to happen!!!! it's a lovely story by the way, all your fanfictions are written beautifully.
Wow! I really love this one, the way you do hair is truly amazing. And, the fic is really awesome as well, you're amazing at writing, and I love how you can make two characters that I previously thought did not go together at all seem perfect together. I think I have a new found appreciation for Sakura. Is it strange that your talking in your fic about how depressing constant rain is, and to me that sounds like heaven? Rain always puts me in a really good mood... lol But, yeah, can I ask how you do your hair? It's really amazing.
i like that fanfic.....you did a great job on this i love lots of weird pairings deidara sakura sasori sakura itachi sakura hidan sakura deidara hinata sasori hinata deidara tenten deidara yugito hidan yugito
Oh wow Ijust read the chapter. The part with Itachi and Sakura talking was just awesome written, it was so realistic and the explanations were so well deliberated. It could have been in the manga. And the part when Konan and Sakura were talking was sweet too, I liked the conversation. And finally the talk between Sakura and Deidara was really deep and nice. Loved it. And the picture you drew for this scene does so perfectly fit. I mean it totally shows Sakuras emotions, her love, her despair, her feeling of guilt. And Deidara as the caring and loving guy. Really really good done. I´m totally looking forward for the next chapter. I want to see how Deidara reacts on the missionand what Itachi will do.